Revision

Revision is a great thing in writing because you can gurrantee that your original first copy will have tons of mistakes. I always have to revise my writing because I am not perfect so I know there would be mistakes. My drafting process is pretty good now because my papers go through about four sets of eyes before I turn it in as a final copy. It aslo helps tremendously that my instructors comments are very clear and she helps me out individually if I need it.

Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec

This painting portrays two young kids that are kissing and four playing. It Appears they will be having sex later. The rhetorical situation in this is that kids are starting to have sex at a young age, younger than ever and thats the reason for early pregnancies.

NO! Not the T.V.

Unplugging all the Television sets in America will only make society go crazy because todays lifestyle is based on T.V. In contrast, it will make society healthier, better educated, and more independent simply because people would not know how to spend their free time. More kids will begin to be outside which will lower the obesity in America. Also, children will be more focus on their school work because T.V's are not there to distract them. The average person spends 22 hours watching T.V per week. Now, kids have to find another way to spend those 22 hours and they are not going to sleep. They are going to be outside like normal kids or doing homework. Not to mention how much more healthy America would be if there were no T.V's. People do not have to watch mouth watering commercials from McDonalds every other commercial.

Power of Advertisement

Advertisement is a very powerful thing because advertisement is seen everywhere. From catchy billboards on the highway to mouth watering commercials on the television, advertisement is apart of our lives and that is why advertisement is so powerful. Another reason why is simply because people want what they do not have. So if you advertise it on tv, magazines, billboards, etc, then you will convince the people that your product is the one for them.